tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post7421028636924501061..comments2023-11-24T11:33:55.215+03:00Comments on I'm Writing Too: Party At The Bus StopKristi Lonheimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16541224246393137201noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-67074481411042152452018-03-03T06:44:49.696+03:002018-03-03T06:44:49.696+03:00I agree it is a nice ending, it kept me wondering....I agree it is a nice ending, it kept me wondering. I especially like the word "Bummer" it sets the tone for me. Great post! jmauehayhurst@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14074144896316291020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-7618315444384672442018-03-03T00:33:35.266+03:002018-03-03T00:33:35.266+03:00Oh, bummer! Nice ending, Kristi. Oh, bummer! Nice ending, Kristi. Alice Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05302512837699702430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-18724351522563697512018-03-03T00:09:56.904+03:002018-03-03T00:09:56.904+03:00You had me, I truly thought you were going to be s...You had me, I truly thought you were going to be surprised. I loved how you ended in a single word that summed up my sentiments perfectly, too! Liz Forderhasehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07541528039699542253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-18196521770217555332018-03-02T22:39:58.822+03:002018-03-02T22:39:58.822+03:00Maybe you showed up early? Will she be coming soo...Maybe you showed up early? Will she be coming soon after this? I am in suspense...I hope there's a part 2! Thank you for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14534667727651765368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-84820455688992848122018-03-02T13:46:51.109+03:002018-03-02T13:46:51.109+03:00Hope of success soars,
patient under the guise
of ...Hope of success soars,<br />patient under the guise<br />of childhood wanderings.<br />Trust is the currency<br />for a seat on this bus,<br />heading into forward<br />days unknown.<br /><br />-- Line-lifting for some poetry comments. Pardon my intrusions.<br />:)<br />KevinDogtraxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079631702744063837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-44256913970966752472018-03-02T08:30:17.710+03:002018-03-02T08:30:17.710+03:00You do such a lovely job of getting your reader...You do such a lovely job of getting your reader's attention and using suspense to keep us wondering how the evening will end. Will she be waiting at the bus stop? I look forward to reading your posts this month.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04992928283157138991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-47469092343115446072018-03-02T08:13:22.955+03:002018-03-02T08:13:22.955+03:00Uh oh! Sounds like someone is testing you...Uh oh! Sounds like someone is testing you...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com