tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post5778194812699058942..comments2023-11-24T11:33:55.215+03:00Comments on I'm Writing Too: If You Give A Girl Some Sand... (13/31)Kristi Lonheimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16541224246393137201noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-42479240804291598512019-03-14T04:36:36.351+03:002019-03-14T04:36:36.351+03:00Your Give a Moose a Muffin format intro had me hoo...Your Give a Moose a Muffin format intro had me hooked - a clever way to entice readers to your SliceHeidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14887802088707677602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7964165787270568978.post-10410350401267263082019-03-13T19:34:55.508+03:002019-03-13T19:34:55.508+03:00Today, I am trying something new. I am commenting ...Today, I am trying something new. I am commenting on the five slices posted above my own so that I can "meet" new slicers! Love the complex sentences hear -- each one beginning with a "when" or a "while" to show the cause and effect in your syntax matching the dunes.Sarah J. Donovanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13735285213282291384noreply@blogger.com