Teacher: No, why?
Student: (Pause)
Teacher: Do I look made at you? (Makes a silly face)
Student: Are you disappointed with me?
Teacher: Yes.
Student: (Pause)
Teacher: Are mad and disappointed the same thing?
Student: No - disappointed is worse.
END SCENE
WOW! So much comes across in this scene, a very short scene, that you wrote! I think I may have to try writing in play style. Thanks for sharing this way of writing and giving me the nudge to try being a playwight.
ReplyDeleteLove the simplicity that allows me to read, step back and think about this scene and how it lands. I can see it in my mind's eye and I learn something about the relationship in the space of a few lines.
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